Learning journal PART2

I don't know the articles I wrote are right or wrong, so I hope teacher can help me on this. The more articles I write the more prombles I have. I don't want the problems keep going, so I hope teacher can correct my articles every times.
I had read the "Advanced" for 2 months, but I can't see the advance in my English. And I read the English's news paper recently, I found a lot of articles I couldn't understand even the words I knew. The last question I have is that News paper and Advanced which is batter for me?
After teacher told us about the learning journal once again, I knew I was wrong at the last one. But I don't want to correct it, because of it will let me fell like do homework.