Learning journal PART11

Today we learned The Parts of an Essay. In this part I don't think everyone in the textbook is right. Like this "A thesis statment is more interesting when it expresses an opinion, not a fact, because facts cannot be argued", I know what is it mean, but the example that it give dosen't very well. And everyone has difference defined on complete sentence. That have to see a person's knowledge and experience. So I think the explain in this part is not complete.